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Re: [Blade/Alien vs Predator] Deserted [NC-17] ONG - 11,24,2014
« Reply #30 on: Sat, Dec 13, 2014, 01:31 AM »
 :candle Update?  Please?

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Re: [Blade/Alien vs Predator] Deserted [NC-17] ONG - 11,24,2014
« Reply #31 on: Sun, Dec 14, 2014, 01:15 PM »
I think I would like to focus on my other Blade story "Backpacking" before continuing this one :hide
I'm sorry but working on two stories at the same time is kinda difficult currently.

I'll update Backpacking soon.

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Re: [Blade/Alien vs Predator] Deserted [NC-17] ONG - 11,24,2014
« Reply #32 on: Sat, Feb 07, 2015, 12:51 PM »
More news  :)

I'm kinda rewriting this story. Don't worry, there's still gonna be Aliens :grin What's going to change is the surrounding plot or rather the relationships/interactions of the characters. And for once, it's not gonna be slashy, but het, namely Blade/Abigail Whistler :devil1

I'll post something soon  ;D

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Re: [Blade/Alien vs Predator] Deserted [NC-17] ONG - 11,24,2014
« Reply #33 on: Sun, Feb 08, 2015, 12:04 PM »
Quote from: Tiberius
I'll post something soon  ;D

Yay!  Can hardly wait...

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Re: [Blade/Alien vs Predator] Deserted [NC-17] ONG - 11,24,2014
« Reply #34 on: Sun, Feb 08, 2015, 01:51 PM »
I'm working on it  ;D



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Re: [Blade/Alien vs Predator] Deserted [NC-17] ONG - 11,24,2014
« Reply #35 on: Mon, Feb 09, 2015, 07:30 AM »
whoo hoo!

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Re: [Blade/Alien vs Predator] Deserted [NC-17] ONG - 11,24,2014
« Reply #36 on: Tue, Feb 10, 2015, 12:49 PM »
Here's a little bit to read  ;D



Silently Blade slipped from the window on the building's roof into the icy night air. Heavy snowfall had set in, slowly burying the town. In the distance behind the skyline was the frozen Lake Erie barely visible in the distance.

He jumped to the adjacent rooftop and hurried away to where he would meet Whistler.

Soon the explosives would go off and blow up the suck head nightclub.
The vampires of Detroit were up to something. What exactly they had yet to find out ans this was the right thing to piss them off enough to come of their hiding places.

There was word that a new hunter was in town, killed three little suckhead punks in a train station last night. Some ridiculous rookie, no doubt. Nothing important.

Blade reached the main street, mostly empty by this time of the night. No one noticed him above their heads as he jumped to a building across the street.

Several block away behind him the explosion went off and illuminated the night for a moment. Sounded like it went exactly as planned.
It didn't take long for police sirens to sound. No problem, they would be out of the area by the time the police reached the explosion site.

He heard Whistler's footsteps a block away in the snowy alley ... and someone nearing from the next crossroad. His hackles raised.

By the time he reached Whistler, there was a young white woman approaching him.
This wasn't a chance meeting. She wasn't harmless. Blade could tell from her body language and Whistler's reaction.

"The fuck you're doing here, girl?" Whistler grunted gruffly.

Her right hand went to a pocket of her winter jacket.

Fuck ...
As a dark shadow Blade descended from the roof and landed silently behind her.
Whistler's expression didn't change the slightest as he saw him.

Blade grabbed the woman. He held her arms behind her back, tight enough to inflict some pain.
She smelled of vampire.

"Speak or you're dead, familiar," Blade hissed.
"And don't even think about it. You're gonna end up breaking your arm, not hurting me," he added as her body tensed up.

Whistler's expression was strangely and inexplicably surprised, nothing that made any sense in a situation like this.

"Who send you?" Blade inquired and pushed her into the nearest wall.
She struggled. It was no useless squirming, she knew how to fight, but of course it was no avail against him.
He easily pinned her against the wall and disarmed her. A gun and a silver stake of all things dropped to the ground, sinking into the snow.
Suckheads joking? Trying to fuck with them?
Then Blade recognized the workmanship of the stake. Whistler had forged it. How the fuck ...

"I'm no familiar!" she blurted out.

Blade pulled the zipper of her jacket open and exposed her neck to check for her glyph. He found none.
Fear raised in her scent and showed in her wide-eyed expression.

"Blade, stop." Whistler touched his shoulder. He sounded tired and stressed.
"Let her go, she ain't with them. Abby is my daughter."

Shock and confusion assaulted Blade. He thought he wasn't hearing right.


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Re: [Blade/Alien vs Predator] Deserted [NC-17] ONG - 02,10,2015
« Reply #37 on: Wed, Feb 11, 2015, 10:55 AM »
Interesting—erm—start. :ggrin Please update soon!

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Re: [Blade/Alien vs Predator] Deserted [NC-17] ONG - 02,10,2015
« Reply #38 on: Wed, Feb 11, 2015, 11:31 AM »
 :evillol

The rewrite starts at the beginning, since I think it will work best when the meeting with Abigail Whistler is written from Blade's POV and the situation is a little different and Whistler already knows about his daughter, but hasn't told Blade yet, which adds a nice conflict and Blade can be pissed and sulk :grin

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Re: [Blade/Alien vs Predator] Deserted [NC-17] ONG - 02,10,2015
« Reply #39 on: Mon, Feb 23, 2015, 11:37 AM »
Update? Pretty please?
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Re: [Blade/Alien vs Predator] Deserted [NC-17] ONG - 02,10,2015
« Reply #40 on: Mon, Feb 23, 2015, 06:12 PM »
I'm trying ... People at work are crazy :blech